If you don't know by now, this is my first series of fantasy stories. I'm a new writer, and I seem to be improving as I go along. I know my first story was OK....and my second one was even better, but I hope to blow you all away with this one. I appreciate constructive criticism...and I really do read all of the coments. --- *BEEP BEEP BEEP* I woke up. "Ohhhhh......" I said, rubbing my eyes. "What ime is it?" I looked at the clock on Kevin's bedstand, 8:30 a.m. "Holy shit!! Kevin wake up!!!" I yelled. His hair was...
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